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January 9, 2011
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Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XSi
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Jan 9, 2011, 2:01:37 AM
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Edit: Ok, I finally broke down, went back and did some tonal and contrast tweaks to really make the image "pop" as one of the primary criticisms before was the lack of contrast appropriate for such a black and white image. I agreed, but lacked the technical and editing skills to do so at the time without sacrificing a great amount of detail. I am happy to say that has changed now and this is the final result :)

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:icondavid-will:
~David-Will Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Well done!
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:icondica:
~DiCa Jan 31, 2011   Photographer
nice! :D
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:icongraphitecolours:
=GraphiteColours Jan 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi! You've been featured here. Thanks.
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:iconsteelatlas:
=SteelAtlas Jan 26, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks so much for the feature, the support is truly appreciated :nod:
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:iconlowrah88:
~LowRah88 Jan 21, 2011
i saw that there were alot of comments about needing more contrast but honestly i don't think that you could feasibly add more without over or under exposing it. you have dark blacks and really bright whites so i'm not sure how you are going to beef up contrast with out some major editing in photoshop. I think the middle grays you captured are lovely and you captured some really nice textures. The photo does look slightly over exposed but not so terribly that it can't be fixed in photoshop. The only other thing that i noticed was that the foreground isnt as sharp as the middle or back ground. Maybe a higher f stop and a tripod might help with that.
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:icondannybravissimo:
~DannyBravissimo Jan 21, 2011
there are no punch because of the lack of contrast. I dont like the composition eather sorry mate :)
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=SteelAtlas Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
*curls into fetal position*

:D
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~zakuuhxc Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
great shot!
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=SteelAtlas Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :nod:
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Mood: Wow! ~CaitttlinMarie Jan 10, 2011
I love this! I'm not sure how to critique something that is so close to perfect and can't think of anything that would make it perfect.
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